Tuesday, April 21, 2015

Hiding



I’ve faked so many laughs and smiles
Trying to fool those who will see,
That I weaved and spat lies that piles
Lie! The truth doesn’t set one free.

Asking myself what I did wrong
To deserve these scars and bruises,
Oh why can’t I be brave and strong?
I’ve made so many excuses.

I sit on the bedroom floor and
It seems like the room started to spin,
Thin metal on my other hand
Breathe in and let it kiss my skin.

I drew with silver came out red,
Relief runs through my every vein
As I break down, cry tears unshed
Made so much mess it will all stain.

Dry my eyes, pull my sleeves lower
I’m back to the girl all ignores,
Sometimes wish my life is over
And this is me behind closed doors.

Note: This is my entry for the second DDH Challenge.



44 comments:

  1. Come here Baby A. Lemme hug you tight!!! TT^TT

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  2. Well made, composed and expressed A! Good job! -Captain

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  3. ang lalim.! ikaw talaga inaabangan ko pag dating sa mga ganito ee.. promise.. hindi ko parin makalimutan ung short story mo na nakalimutan ko yung title.. lol yung may title na 'wake me up..." hehehe ..

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  4. Nose bleed ako te. Pero ang ganda hugot na hugot. love you sis :*

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  5. Ang lalim ng pinaghugutan nito! (O.O)

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  6. hugot na hugot sis! </3 damang dama ko e.. shaket.

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  7. Sa sobrang lalim nalunod ako. Whogoat! Good baby!

    Wala na akong pag-asa talaga!

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  8. hugot ang deep, but you have friends now :)

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  9. A lot of people can relate to this... Great job Wonderland! ;)

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    1. Nobody has called me that for so long. What a relief to be called WONDERLAND again. :D

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  10. this is what happens when you put up a thick and strong mask. You end up wallowing alone your room with nobody to turn to :/

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  11. This is a good composition. Halatang may inspirasyon na pinagkuhaan.

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  12. I LOVE THIS. THIS IS JUST AMAZING. Bruh its very deep but it has that emotion. Theres a lot of stuff going on with this. Its quite exemplary. You could be the next Lang Leav. Love it! :* -El ;)

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  13. Love it!!!..:D Galing mo talaga... natamaan ako sa first stanza. sometimes I do that, I mask my own pain.

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  14. May melody sa words. Binasa ko 'to nang malakas or pabulong at sobrang nagustuhan ko iyong rhyme. Naniniwala talaga ako na may musika sa tula at isa sa patunay ang tula na 'to. Gusto ko rin iyong emosyon. And somehow, kahit papaano naka-relate ako. Minsan ko na ring na-experience ang ganito, iyon lang 'di blade ang gamit ko, kuko lang. Nag-inarte lang ako. Sabi nila, lahat daw ng taong dumaan sa adolescence stage, bihira lang ang hindi nasugatan. Nabasa ko yata 'to sa isang japanese manga. Naalala ko lang nang nabasa ko iyong tula :)

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  15. So nice ate! But I somehow feel that this story is somehow true to life. I feel you. I also feel that damn feeling. Just hold on tight. Pray. 😘

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  16. May sasabihin ka na sa poetry class next sem. Lool

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  17. ang ganda keep writing to inspire many :)

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  18. Sana makagawa din ako ng poem katulad nito :)

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  19. You know who I am.

    I do love the fact that your poetry does not care about form. You care about expression - about getting all your wanted stuff out of you and wanting your readers to empathize with you. :)

    P.S. You will remain my granddaughter no matter what. (Drama pota hahaha)

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  20. mas magandang mag-exercise/sumali sa isang sport kaysa saktan ang sarili. na-relieve ka na ng stress, naging physically healthy ka pa. lol! as if na may karapatan akong magsabi ng ganyan. well, bagong buhay na ako... sana xD

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  21. Allison I love this. Really. I'm not much into poetry, but this has so much impact. Kudos.

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  22. yung unang stanza sapul ako. kaya nga bungis-ngis ako eh. But no one knows except sa mga taong nakakakilala sa akin. hahaha na miss tuloy kitang bruha ka. :3

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  23. Asking myself what i did wrong ? haikss ..
    relate much ako dto Ms. Rockstar >>

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  24. very deep indeed , so much feelings.

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  25. Grabe Ate Alli, ang deep! Damang dama ko yung lungkot kahit sobrang lalim ng mga words. And somehow, nakarelate ako. Good Job Ate Alli! Galing niyo po :)))

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  26. Aww Li! So deep. :') Thanks for sharing this to me. :) I love you so much! Ipagpatuloy mo 'yaaan. Andito lang ako para suportahan ka. :* :>

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  27. Very well written. Would be nice to see it published :)

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  28. Wow! I just hope that this is not you. XP

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  29. NananananaMigeeeehhhApril 23, 2015 at 11:10 PM

    That is so fetch!! I cri evrytiem...

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  30. Awwwwwww naman! ^o^ medyo nakaka nosebleed ahah

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