Tuesday, April 21, 2015

Hiding



I’ve faked so many laughs and smiles
Trying to fool those who will see,
That I weaved and spat lies that piles
Lie! The truth doesn’t set one free.

Asking myself what I did wrong
To deserve these scars and bruises,
Oh why can’t I be brave and strong?
I’ve made so many excuses.

I sit on the bedroom floor and
It seems like the room started to spin,
Thin metal on my other hand
Breathe in and let it kiss my skin.

I drew with silver came out red,
Relief runs through my every vein
As I break down, cry tears unshed
Made so much mess it will all stain.

Dry my eyes, pull my sleeves lower
I’m back to the girl all ignores,
Sometimes wish my life is over
And this is me behind closed doors.

Note: This is my entry for the second DDH Challenge.



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44 comments:

  1. AegyoDayDreamerApril 21, 2015 at 10:58 PM

    Come here Baby A. Lemme hug you tight!!! TT^TT

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  2. UnknownApril 21, 2015 at 10:59 PM

    Wow so deep!!!!!

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  3. TrizzbeyApril 21, 2015 at 11:26 PM

    Well made, composed and expressed A! Good job! -Captain

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  4. MAHARLiKANAApril 22, 2015 at 12:48 AM

    ang lalim.! ikaw talaga inaabangan ko pag dating sa mga ganito ee.. promise.. hindi ko parin makalimutan ung short story mo na nakalimutan ko yung title.. lol yung may title na 'wake me up..." hehehe ..

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  5. ixshailaApril 22, 2015 at 1:03 AM

    Nose bleed ako te. Pero ang ganda hugot na hugot. love you sis :*

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  6. SorceressPrincessApril 22, 2015 at 10:15 AM

    Ang lalim ng pinaghugutan nito! (O.O)

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  7. Mae VegaApril 22, 2015 at 11:41 AM

    hugot na hugot sis! </3 damang dama ko e.. shaket.

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  8. Queen RichelleApril 22, 2015 at 12:26 PM

    Sa sobrang lalim nalunod ako. Whogoat! Good baby!

    Wala na akong pag-asa talaga!

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  9. UnknownApril 22, 2015 at 12:44 PM

    hugot ang deep, but you have friends now :)

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  10. UnknownApril 22, 2015 at 1:43 PM

    I can relate.. XD

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  11. Amelia LockhartApril 22, 2015 at 2:00 PM

    A lot of people can relate to this... Great job Wonderland! ;)

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    1. WisdomDeath April 22, 2015 at 3:23 PM

      Nobody has called me that for so long. What a relief to be called WONDERLAND again. :D

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  12. AnonymousApril 22, 2015 at 4:08 PM

    this is what happens when you put up a thick and strong mask. You end up wallowing alone your room with nobody to turn to :/

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  13. UnknownApril 22, 2015 at 4:11 PM

    This is a good composition. Halatang may inspirasyon na pinagkuhaan.

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  14. UnknownApril 22, 2015 at 4:34 PM

    I LOVE THIS. THIS IS JUST AMAZING. Bruh its very deep but it has that emotion. Theres a lot of stuff going on with this. Its quite exemplary. You could be the next Lang Leav. Love it! :* -El ;)

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  15. UnknownApril 22, 2015 at 4:43 PM

    Love it!!!..:D Galing mo talaga... natamaan ako sa first stanza. sometimes I do that, I mask my own pain.

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  16. UnknownApril 22, 2015 at 4:44 PM

    May melody sa words. Binasa ko 'to nang malakas or pabulong at sobrang nagustuhan ko iyong rhyme. Naniniwala talaga ako na may musika sa tula at isa sa patunay ang tula na 'to. Gusto ko rin iyong emosyon. And somehow, kahit papaano naka-relate ako. Minsan ko na ring na-experience ang ganito, iyon lang 'di blade ang gamit ko, kuko lang. Nag-inarte lang ako. Sabi nila, lahat daw ng taong dumaan sa adolescence stage, bihira lang ang hindi nasugatan. Nabasa ko yata 'to sa isang japanese manga. Naalala ko lang nang nabasa ko iyong tula :)

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  17. shinaya_waaraApril 22, 2015 at 5:06 PM

    Relate!! Ang galing ni Baby A!

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  18. UnknownApril 22, 2015 at 5:07 PM

    So nice ate! But I somehow feel that this story is somehow true to life. I feel you. I also feel that damn feeling. Just hold on tight. Pray. 😘

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  19. -TheSweetGirl14April 22, 2015 at 5:19 PM

    so deep :O

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  20. AnonymousApril 22, 2015 at 5:35 PM

    May sasabihin ka na sa poetry class next sem. Lool

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  21. UnknownApril 22, 2015 at 8:45 PM

    ang ganda keep writing to inspire many :)

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  22. UnknownApril 22, 2015 at 8:48 PM

    Sana makagawa din ako ng poem katulad nito :)

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  23. AnonymousApril 22, 2015 at 10:05 PM

    You know who I am.

    I do love the fact that your poetry does not care about form. You care about expression - about getting all your wanted stuff out of you and wanting your readers to empathize with you. :)

    P.S. You will remain my granddaughter no matter what. (Drama pota hahaha)

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  24. Mr. SUNshiner17April 22, 2015 at 10:24 PM

    mas magandang mag-exercise/sumali sa isang sport kaysa saktan ang sarili. na-relieve ka na ng stress, naging physically healthy ka pa. lol! as if na may karapatan akong magsabi ng ganyan. well, bagong buhay na ako... sana xD

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  25. AnonymousApril 22, 2015 at 11:02 PM

    Allison I love this. Really. I'm not much into poetry, but this has so much impact. Kudos.

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  26. AielleApril 22, 2015 at 11:56 PM

    yung unang stanza sapul ako. kaya nga bungis-ngis ako eh. But no one knows except sa mga taong nakakakilala sa akin. hahaha na miss tuloy kitang bruha ka. :3

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  27. Vernalyn JanoApril 23, 2015 at 11:34 AM

    Asking myself what i did wrong ? haikss ..
    relate much ako dto Ms. Rockstar >>

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  28. UnknownApril 23, 2015 at 12:16 PM

    very deep indeed , so much feelings.

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  29. UnknownApril 23, 2015 at 12:20 PM

    Grabe Ate Alli, ang deep! Damang dama ko yung lungkot kahit sobrang lalim ng mga words. And somehow, nakarelate ako. Good Job Ate Alli! Galing niyo po :)))

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  30. UnknownApril 23, 2015 at 12:53 PM

    Wonderful :)

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  31. ReneeApril 23, 2015 at 4:43 PM

    Aww Li! So deep. :') Thanks for sharing this to me. :) I love you so much! Ipagpatuloy mo 'yaaan. Andito lang ako para suportahan ka. :* :>

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  32. Alfonso GabrielApril 23, 2015 at 10:59 PM

    Very well written. Would be nice to see it published :)

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  33. OdracirApril 23, 2015 at 11:02 PM

    Wow! I just hope that this is not you. XP

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  34. NananananaMigeeeehhhApril 23, 2015 at 11:10 PM

    That is so fetch!! I cri evrytiem...

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  35. UnknownApril 23, 2015 at 11:14 PM

    Nice one :))

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  36. UnknownApril 23, 2015 at 11:16 PM

    Nice oneeee!! :))

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  37. UnknownApril 24, 2015 at 11:20 AM

    I relate :)

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  38. UnknownApril 24, 2015 at 11:23 AM

    I relate :) nice

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  39. UnknownApril 24, 2015 at 1:40 PM

    Hugot

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  40. UnknownApril 24, 2015 at 1:41 PM

    Hugot

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  41. Pen-and-paper-girlApril 24, 2015 at 8:05 PM

    ang galing! :D

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  42. AnonymousMay 5, 2015 at 11:09 AM

    Awwwwwww naman! ^o^ medyo nakaka nosebleed ahah

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